Score: 7

"Super Coolness on Rye Bread!"

submission: Briskman: The Game

date: March 3, 2005

Dude, that was awesome! Great job. I gave this a 4/5. Very basic, but super fun. Just a few things I'd change are 1.) Try to refrain from using CS sounds...its not bad taste, it's just they're used way too much! and 2.) Make the background more appealing! Otherwise, that was quite fun. Where'd you get that music from? It's great! Are there any decent tutorials on how to make a game like that?

Score: 9

"WOW!"

submission: Sonia's Escape

date: February 22, 2005

I loved it immensily and I feel really weird for saying that! Actually what you did was very intelligent-- you communicated through movement rather than using words (well for the most part since they spoke gibberish). The character movements were another plus, since they looked like they moved in 3d. The feel of the world around this peice was EXTREMELY abstract, and that's why I think everyone is loving it. The only thing I didn't like were that some of the characters could have been a bit more smooth in line-quality.

It's very different. It's very much amazing. Excellent work.

Score: 3

"Meh..."

submission: Faust - Episode 2

date: February 22, 2005

Sorry....I didn't like it. You had excellent art direction but otherwise it was immensily boring and not enough action to keep me interested. I usually can focus and follow story patterns well, but I found myself spacing out a lot in this peice. The dog was pretty cool though.

Score: 7

"Great!"

submission: Story 3 - Mysterious Cave

date: February 22, 2005

You have awesome potential with this panel style. Halarious! I loved it. Good work.

Score: 8

"Powerful poetic presentation"

submission: Robot Desire

date: February 22, 2005

Loved it. Very emotional. Poor robo. Did you write that? It reminded me of a great poem.

Score: 10

"This goes in my favorites."

submission: Digital Freedom

date: January 28, 2005

That was brilliant. You've taken a robot and made a metaphor out of what a real human truly is when he/she/it is weighed against the world. Simply brilliant.

I really don't have any complaints about this peice other than the art direction could have been just a tad bit better. Don't get me wrong, it was pretty damn good, but weighed against the GREAT music (btw, where can I download that beat?), it just felt a bit off.

But GREAT work. Definately worthy of the top 50 imo.

Score: 5

"Cool, but needs work."

submission: Balance Pencil

date: December 27, 2004

I simply suggest you turn down the sound quality for this because it'll reduce the file size and more people will play it. And this is one hard game! Once it starts tipping, it just gets worse and worse! I tried it 10 times and I could never save it. Make it easier on us bad-with-mouse people! Pretty cool though.

Score: 7

"Pretty good job"

submission: A Christmas Tale

date: December 27, 2004

I liked it. Had a very gothic tone to it. Was that Danny Elfman music from Batman 2? The audio was great.

The drawings were great as well. My only complaint is that some of those scenes laster far too long-- example being the cat hitting the ornament. Otherwise it was pretty good.

I like how everything was gray except for the tree. Is that symbolic in how xmas brings joy or something?

Score: 7

"Pretty good!"

submission: Zelda Short: Ganandorf

date: December 8, 2004

Hey, that was great. Quality all the way. Needed a few bits of work though--
Mouth movements. Phonemes! Their mouths didnt move, so I was like "is this a narration or what? Oh he's talkin-- wait who's that guy?"

And I just felt it went too quickly at parts. That's about it though.

Good work. Finish it or something!

Score: 3

"Wellllll"

submission: Triple Helix Teaser

date: December 7, 2004

Seems a bit interesting to be honest...but the music, the slowness of a few scenes, and the stereotypical anime characters with no elbows really took away the greatness of it! You seem to know what you're doing, so I'm judging you as a pro. If you want my critiquing, here it goes--

a.) The music. It sounds like you took a really bad microphone and put it up to the speaker while watching Rockman Neo. Either try to find the original track (which I have if you want it, just email me or something), or think about using a different song altogether.

b.) A few scenes, such as the title sequence, just seemed to drag. With "Back to Mad" playing in the background, it feels like things have to be going REALLY friggin' quick. Don't get me wrong, some scenes in there were great! But a few just seemed slow. Try to make a time-limit for scenes or something, you know?

c.) Anime Anime Anime! It's all over the internet. The whole style seems to be over-used. And what's worse is most people can't draw worth shit. You however are inbetween good and bad when it comes to the style. Work on the arms in particular...something was wrong with them and I cant quite put my finger on it! Or maybe just practice a whole different style or something.

Anyways, I hope I helped out. Needs some work, but if you take a few suggestions from a few people, there's no doubt your future stuff will kick major ass. Good work and good luck!