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Great!

You have awesome potential with this panel style. Halarious! I loved it. Good work.

Powerful poetic presentation

Loved it. Very emotional. Poor robo. Did you write that? It reminded me of a great poem.

HappyCow4ever responds:

i some had it planned out..wrote a story board n such..it just came together..i have no idea how i did it..it was like 4 in the morning when i did it...but glad you liked it!

This goes in my favorites.

That was brilliant. You've taken a robot and made a metaphor out of what a real human truly is when he/she/it is weighed against the world. Simply brilliant.

I really don't have any complaints about this peice other than the art direction could have been just a tad bit better. Don't get me wrong, it was pretty damn good, but weighed against the GREAT music (btw, where can I download that beat?), it just felt a bit off.

But GREAT work. Definately worthy of the top 50 imo.

Godlimations responds:

thanks, m-e-t-a-p-h-o-r.... I like that word :) yeah yeah the art needs improvement, to be honest, i did this in spare time and in aweness came out on front page. if you would like to download the song? you can search on Newgrounds for the username "Jurrie" who's made the song "Digital Freedom" there you go :) TOP 50????? you kidding? I'll laugh... no seriously I will heh. :) what am I saying? where is my faith.. forgive me Lord :(

Pretty good job

I liked it. Had a very gothic tone to it. Was that Danny Elfman music from Batman 2? The audio was great.

The drawings were great as well. My only complaint is that some of those scenes laster far too long-- example being the cat hitting the ornament. Otherwise it was pretty good.

I like how everything was gray except for the tree. Is that symbolic in how xmas brings joy or something?

Pretty good!

Hey, that was great. Quality all the way. Needed a few bits of work though--
Mouth movements. Phonemes! Their mouths didnt move, so I was like "is this a narration or what? Oh he's talkin-- wait who's that guy?"

And I just felt it went too quickly at parts. That's about it though.

Good work. Finish it or something!

Wellllll

Seems a bit interesting to be honest...but the music, the slowness of a few scenes, and the stereotypical anime characters with no elbows really took away the greatness of it! You seem to know what you're doing, so I'm judging you as a pro. If you want my critiquing, here it goes--

a.) The music. It sounds like you took a really bad microphone and put it up to the speaker while watching Rockman Neo. Either try to find the original track (which I have if you want it, just email me or something), or think about using a different song altogether.

b.) A few scenes, such as the title sequence, just seemed to drag. With "Back to Mad" playing in the background, it feels like things have to be going REALLY friggin' quick. Don't get me wrong, some scenes in there were great! But a few just seemed slow. Try to make a time-limit for scenes or something, you know?

c.) Anime Anime Anime! It's all over the internet. The whole style seems to be over-used. And what's worse is most people can't draw worth shit. You however are inbetween good and bad when it comes to the style. Work on the arms in particular...something was wrong with them and I cant quite put my finger on it! Or maybe just practice a whole different style or something.

Anyways, I hope I helped out. Needs some work, but if you take a few suggestions from a few people, there's no doubt your future stuff will kick major ass. Good work and good luck!

LiterallyLuffy responds:

Thank you for the "good luck" part.

Everything else you mentioned isn't really helping me out. I'm new to Flash. Not a pro. I appreciate you thinking that way... but, still.

For your info, I did not hold up my mic to Rockman Neo. I edited it myself so it'd work to my Flash (I'm not sure if you're a fan of Rockman Neo, but if you are, you should've picked up on the different sound editing). The quality wasn't bad at all, until I had to do the whole "streaming" thing, with the sound file.

What the HELL is it with people and anime?! All I here is "I hate anime!", "Stop making anime!", and "Buy me those pants!"

Why don't you just start saying: "Flash, Flash, Flash! It's all over the internet, people should stop using it!" That seems logical, does it not? (I can't draw anything other than anime...)

I don't know why, but, I'm pretty upset about your review.... With all those stick movies out there, you can't bother to give me an average of over three?! Kinda puts a hole in my stomach.

But, meh, whatever, there will always be the odd person out there, who will judge your work, professionally.

Anyways, thanks for letting me know what you think...

Great job, rookie!

YOU, sir, are awesome. You are the reason I still look in the portal for potential goodness. That had me laugh plenty of times-- mainly when the monster screams in rage and when he just splats the scotish stereotypes! Brilliant! The art in this was okay...I could tell what was happening but overall it needs some work. It just looks like you scribbled in some stuff with the paint tool. Spend a little more time on the art and something like this could be on the frontpage!

Again, great job.

7 animators for THAT?

It was boring. I respect your will to exhaggerate stick men and boxes, but it has been done to DEATH. Not unique in any way unfortunately. I found myself bored out of my mind after the second animation. I highly suggest you go for more stylized approach. And the music-- we've all heard it before. Find some action-esq loops for each one of those animations. Hearing the same song for each one takes a lot of attention away from scene-movement.

If all 7 of you can draw well, make a full-length animation or something with more realistic/cartoonish characters. I think it would surpass something like this 10-fold.

TvP responds:

No.

Totally awesome

I loved the hell out of it. Some parts were a bit long (the beginning should have taken like 20 seconds, not 2 minutes), but the whole idea in general is very comical if not halarious in that immature way that the majority of people enjoy. Great work. This goes in my favorites!

I gave this a 3

Short, Stylish, and Stupid. Just the way I love 'em. Good job.

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