HA!
That was really good! I laughed! I signed in just to give this a 5. You're obviously above and beyond an intermediate Flash user, so I'm going to judge you as a pro. I saw no problems whatsoever-- except the main characters pose looks just a little too light for that head of his...the only suggestion I have is to put maybe a little 'gravity' in his body-- weigh things down a bit more on him and such. Otherwise, that was awesome. GREAT job.
meh
It was on the low end of a decent flash. Here's my opinion on what you need-
-- Better Phonemes-- the study of mouth movement-- it looked like you just scribbled the mouth on. Try drawing vowels like "Ah" and "Ooh" and everything, then pasting them on to the face and lip sync.
-- Better Acting-- There was nothing intense about the acting..AND THIS IS A FIGHT SCENE! I didn't "feel" the characters in any way.
-- Better...Unique spirit?-- This is probably just me, so if you think otherwise, just disregard this- I keep on seeing japanese anime characters all over the place. And I keep on hearing techno loops on par with what you had in there. They've raped the entire american animation world. Too many people are doing this. It's not unique in ANY way. Stop now before it gets you too!
It was okay...
Great stab to show off your early potential. It was pretty damn good compared to the other things I've seen tonight. A few things I'd do are--
Try to speak a little more fluently...I missed about 50% of what the character was saying.
Add a background or two!
Make your next movie a lot longer!
Try to do different poses of the character rather than relying on just the one side view.
Add better humor! I don't know why...but it just reminded me of some stereotypical 70's british humor bit. A well placed scream or horrid groan can do wonders!
And...Ah I think that's it. It's 2 AM here so I'm going to bed. Good work, dude. Jolly good show.
Thanks for the feedback, sorry the animation was a bit poor but your kind of comments are great encouragment to keep getting better.
Appreciated it.
What the hell!?
Okay, I'm fully aware that A LOT of people are going to badmouth you...hell I'm going to say that was damn offensive to the mentally challenged and to the children with Downs syndrome! But aside from my respect and morals and junk, that had me cracking up. I ESPECIALLY cracked up near the end when you made that "MMCUUUUHH" noise and there were was a bunch of jibberish on screen. That made me laugh pretty hard. Seriously. And that's what counts.
...now I'm sure we're both going to hell...
Good Job!
Loved it! Excellent work. Your timing was flawless! Sound had two different perameters (the music sounded good, but the voices were a little scratchy...import all your sounds as mp3's to make them sound crisp or get a sound program and equalize the sound files).
Graphics weren't anything I've seen before (infact I've made a character very close to yours in the past!) but they were quality compared to many others out there. Your exhaggeration (sp?) on the characters was great, especially the movements of the lips. Wow! SOLID!
Humor was pretty good-- the same thing happened to a friend of mine at a fishing show...the room was dark and he asked the dummy what time it was...heheh.
Over all I gave this 4/5 7/10
Could use just a bit of improvement, but overall it was quality. Nice work, dude.
God damn halarious
That was great, dude. Funny as hell. I mean things like this need to be screwed up to make you laugh. Graphics sucked, but your voice(s) went well with the frames. Over all it sucked, but it was the good kind of suck! Nice work!
DON'T BLAME THIS!!!
LOL OMG WTF!?!11?
Excellent work! The graphics were bad, but the basic message made up for it. I know what you mean with the whole AOL disease...I myself have AIM and about half of the people I talk to type like that...and what's ever MORE scary is that they're just a few years younger than me! Scary indeed! It's a nuisance! And CS sucks! SUCKS I SAY! Damn 10 year old hackers owning my ass.
Oh, I have this 5/5. Once again, excellent work!
WOWz0RZR0X0RZYEAH!
Excellent work to say the least! This is the first thing I haven't given a 0 to tonight either, so I knight thee, Chris Cox. Arise and receive honor!
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