Pretty good
I'm not really in the mood to critque this super-heavily, but all in all I like it. Good job. It's difficult for me to say such things, so consider yourself a good artist. Your phoneme studies and facial movements are very impressive. The only flaw that bothered me were that the characters didnt move very much-- half of the time they were in one position, or you gave them 'cardboard' tween movements. They lacked gestures, and that's what truly brings a character to life! But considering the length, I can imagine that would have taken FOREVER to do, so I can look passed it. Just fool around with it in the continuing chapter if you want. All in all, great job. Cant wait for the next one!